Another thing I picked up on was the repetitiveness. This also translated into their romance which based on how fast everything happened was pretty unbelievable. I couldn’t create any bond with Carter or Austin because the missing development made it so that I didn’t really feel like I knew them. Which brings me to the lack of connection with the characters. There was never time for anything to develop or for the reader to witness the development if there was any. The pacing was stilted and nearly every chapter in the first half of the book had a time jump of days, weeks or even months. If I understood correctly the book takes place over a 3-year time span and this may seem ok but in this case, it was severely lacking in development. My second issue was with the pacing which was probably my least favorite part. First, it became apparent early on that the dialogue between the characters was choppy and while sometimes that is easy to overlook when it is constantly present it becomes harder to ignore. Further to Fall was a rocky road but ultimately, I was happy with the ending…
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